#8Sunday, Weekend Writing Warriors: Burning Sky #14



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More Burning Sky and Jonnie the Gypsy King:

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I’m a strong man, yet this strength went beyond anything I had ever experienced. The muscles in my back supported the wing structure, stopped my fall, and held my body up in the aether. I felt this strength inside me, at the core and the heart of me.

I did not fly alone. Another flew with me, someone I felt but could not see;  no matter how I twisted and turned in the aether, he stayed behind me and out of my field of vision. I flew, at times spiraling down, then catching updrafts of wind and riding them up.

Have peace, for now.

Blue sky

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4 thoughts on “#8Sunday, Weekend Writing Warriors: Burning Sky #14

  1. Teresa Cypher June 28, 2015 / 10:21 am

    This is beautiful, Heloise! I was flying along. It reads almost like poetry. 🙂


  2. Eden June 28, 2015 / 7:25 pm

    I love how you show us in his head, sensing the way his body now works and knowing that it is more than himself that has made this possible.


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