#rainbowsnippets: Last Dance #11

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Onward to another paragraph from one of my WIPs Last Dance: Watching Rocco, Joey is trying to get up the nerve to ask him to dance. But Joey sees the ghost of Donna Summer, which apparently heralds a seizure.

This is the last line from Last Dance #10: “Hey,” Rocco said and gave my shoulder a nudge with his broad one. Any harder, and he would have knocked me over.  “Are you okay?”

 

“This is my normal, I guess. Sorry.”

“Do you want to leave? I’ll give you a ride home.”

I got slowly to my feet; he rose with me. “I can take the bus.”

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  1. Dude, the hot guy is offering a ride and you want to take the BUS? LOL!

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  2. Hmmm one wonders why he chooses the bus.

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  3. louiselyons013

     /  January 8, 2017

    Don’t take the bus, man! Get in the car 😉

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  4. Take the ride man! and get to know him better!

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  5. Joey, Joey…Someone (Rocco maybe) needs to talk some sense into you!

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  6. Does he want to show his independence, or is his reaction as sad as it sounds?

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  7. Take the ride home!

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  8. Oh, this made me sad for him. That said, don’t take the bus!

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  9. Too embarrassed by the seizure? Poor guy… I hope Rocco insists.

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